Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Young generations are obsessed

by

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with

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smartphones

for entertainment and communication. Even

through

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, utilizing

smartphone

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is universal in young

kids

, in my view, it is detrimental to their growth inevitably. The main reason

that

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kids

are fond of using

smartphones

frequently in order to

entertainment

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during

the

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their

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leisure

time

. In virtue of

powerful

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performance and various applications of

smartphones

,

kids

are able to do a lot

of fascinated

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fascinating

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activities

as they want

by

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with

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this

tiny electric budget,

for instance

, listening

music

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to music

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, watching films and playing video games. These functions are too attractive to permit

kids

to drop their phones off. From my perspective, it could bring deleterious consequences to

children

's well-being

that

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by

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using

smartphones

for

long

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time

.

Children

's eyesight may be threatened by

phone's

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the phone's

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screen light.

Due to

the lack of self-control in

children

, they are likely to stare at phone screens constantly, their eyes would be

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under the screen lights without adequate rest. Conceivably, the myopia ratio to

younger

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generation would

be

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increase.

Moreover

, it would impact

children

's personal development adversely that

playing

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smartphone

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smartphones

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frequently.

Children

are obligated to join more outdoor

activities

, ensuring them to explore new

stuffs

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stuff

kinds of stuff

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in

real

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the real

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world, rather than staying

at

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indoor

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indoors

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and indulging in the virtual world by smartphone.

According to

research, outdoor

activities

,

such

as hiking, camping,

even

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and even

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aimless play, could empower

kids

to unleash their creativity and

imaginations

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, enhancing their learning ability.

By contrast

, playing

smartphones

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on smartphones

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at home would obstacle to

kids

satisfying their curiosity and recognizing the real world, resulting in

lack

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of sound personality to them. In conclusion,

smartphones

provide young generations

distinguishing

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with distinguishing

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methods for entertainment,

bring

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about the phenomenon that

kids

spend plenty of

time

to play

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them.

However

, I believe

kids

should reduce the

using

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time

of

smartphones

urgently, paradoxically, attempting more

outdoors

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activities

.