The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the proportions of households and the number of hours per week in one country in the years 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, the highest proportion of washing machines and vacuum cleaners,
while
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the smallest percentage of refrigerators, the time spent on housework declined after a 99-year period. In terms of, the lowest percentage of washing machines, they were 40% in 1920,
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this
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frequently increased in 1960, compared to 2019,
this
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surge was seven out of ten. Regarding refrigerators, the smallest percentage in 1920 made up 0%,
furthermore
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, in 1940
this
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began to increase, making up just over half, after a 99-year period,
this
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surged to 100%.
In contrast
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, vacuum cleaners comprised just under a third in 1920,
whereas
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this
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too began to surge in 2000 and made up 100%. Concerning time, there was a fivefold reduction in the number of weekly freedoms spared for washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning, from 50 freedoms to 10 opportunities per week.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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