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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides
infrormation
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information
 concerning the number of crimes in Panama in different kind of crimes from the
year
 2010 to 2019. generally speaking, car theft and robbery
has
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 stayed almost the same during the
year
 with 2700 .
In addition
, after the rise burglary
drobed
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dropped
 to 1000 in most period of time . Moving on to the next part , car theft
has
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decreased
in
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from
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 2013 to 2000 after a long period
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of staying
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staying
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the same
as well
as
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and
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 in the
year
 2017 the
nimber
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number
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 of car
theft
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thefts
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 increased.
Furthermore
, it can be seen that the rate of burglary was decreasing in
year
 2015 .
Therefore
, it increased in the
year
 2016 and stayed the almost same from 2017 to 2019.
Along with
, the figure of robbery we can see in the
year
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years
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 2010 to 2012 it
was
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apply
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leveled off
then
 it climbed down in 2015 and suddenly climbed up in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crime rates
  • Fluctuated
  • Significant spike
  • Consistent trend
  • Prevalent
  • Cumulative change
  • Enforcement
  • Correlate
  • Reduction/increase in crime
  • Categories of crime
  • Level of crime
  • Period of time
  • Analysis
  • Data representation
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