The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in siz major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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subway train systems in different six big cities.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
Tokyo
distributed the highest number of total passengers per year, whilst
London
made up the longest railways. Interestingly,
London
city became the oldest train station which was first served to the public.
Tokyo
, Paris and
London
dominated the most passengers per year at exactly 1927 million, 1191 million and 775 million respectively.
In addition
, the three least contributions were made by Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles at around 45 to 144. In terms of route length of the railways,
London
accounted for almost 400 km.
Moreover
, the figures for Paris,
Tokyo
and Washington DC were allocated well above 125 km to under 200 km.
In contrast
, Kyoto and Los Angeles comprised 11 and 28, consecutively of total railway length. Regarding the railway stations’ establishment date, the oldest was
London
City in 1863,
then
followed by Paris,
Tokyo
, Washington DC and Kyoto were established in the 19th century. Notably, the newest one was Los Angeles which opened in 2001.
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