Pie chart bellow give information about the house hold expenditures of an average vs family in different years. summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The two pie charts illustrate the comparison between Japan and Malaysia
household
spending in five different categories.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in Japan, the most household
expenditure was other
goods and services, Change preposition
on other
while
the lowest rate was spent by
Change preposition
on
health
care
. In Malaysia, the housing sector made up the highest contribution to household
expenditure, whilst health
care
became the last
segment.
In terms of Japan's household
spending, the largest portion was allocated to other goods and services at 29%,it
followed by the food sector contributed 24%. Interestingly, the figures for housing and transport were almost the same at 21% and 20%, respectively. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In contrast
, the output from health
care
was the smallest at 6%.
Regarding Malaysia's household
expenses, the top three picks were Housing (34%), Food (27%) and Other goods and services (26%). In addition
, the contribution from Transport and health
care
were 10% and 3%, consecutively.Submitted by mfmakarim55 on
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