The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

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The given diagram represents the information about solar

panel

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mechanism in processing sunlight into

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apply

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electricity

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for household use, starting with absorbing sun

ray

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and culminating with distributing

energy

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, it can be clearly observed that there are five key components: solar

panel

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, inverter, electrical

panel

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utility

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meter, and

utility

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grid, in order to generate

electricity

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. To

bgein

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begin

with, the solar

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that

attached

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the roof is assigned to absorb

energy

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from the sun and turn it into a DC current.

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, the DC current

flow

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through a wire toward the inverter which

responsible

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for converting DC current into AC current

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control

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the

electricity

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and production of the

energy

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. Later,

and

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electricity

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flow

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through an electrical

panel

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that serves as a controller for distributing the

electricity

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to appliances inside the house.

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, it is interesting to note sometimes the

energy

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retrieved from sunlight can

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the required amount which will be kept and sent to the

utility

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meter.

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, if the solar

electricty

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electricity

is being used over the produced amount, the

utility

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grid will account for providing the

electricity

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instead

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words panel, electricity, energy, utility with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Photovoltaic cells
Direct Current (DC)
Alternating Current (AC)
Inverter
Electric panel
Utility meter
Electric grid
Energy storage
Renewable energy
Sustainable
Excess electricity

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