The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.
The given diagram represents the information about solar
panel
mechanism in processing sunlight into
an
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electricity
for household use, starting with absorbing sun
ray
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and culminating with distributing
energy
.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that there are five key components: solar
panel
, inverter, electrical
panel
,
utility
meter, and
utility
grid, in order to generate
electricity
. To
bgein
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begin
with, the solar
panel
that
attached
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on
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the roof is assigned to absorb
energy
from the sun and turn it into a DC current.
Then
, the DC current
flow
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through a wire toward the inverter which
responsible
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for converting DC current into AC current
along with
control
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controlling
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the
electricity
and production of the
energy
. Later,
and
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electricity
flow
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through an electrical
panel
that serves as a controller for distributing the
electricity
to appliances inside the house.
However
, it is interesting to note sometimes the
energy
retrieved from sunlight can
be exceed
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the required amount which will be kept and sent to the
utility
meter.
Likewise
, if the solar
electricty
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electricity
is being used over the produced amount, the
utility
grid will account for providing the
electricity
instead
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words panel, electricity, energy, utility with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Direct Current (DC)
  • Alternating Current (AC)
  • Inverter
  • Electric panel
  • Utility meter
  • Electric grid
  • Energy storage
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable
  • Excess electricity
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