The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.
The given diagram represents the information about solar
panel
mechanism in processing sunlight into an
Remove the article
apply
electricity
for household use, starting with absorbing sun ray
and culminating with distributing Fix the agreement mistake
rays
energy
.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that there are five key components: solar panel
, inverter, electrical panel
, utility
meter, and utility
grid, in order to generate electricity
.
To bgein
with, the solar Correct your spelling
begin
panel
that attached
Add a missing verb
is attached
on
the roof is assigned to absorb Change preposition
to
energy
from the sun and turn it into a DC current. Then
, the DC current flow
through a wire toward the inverter which Correct subject-verb agreement
flows
responsible
for converting DC current into AC current Add a missing verb
is responsible
along with
control
the Wrong verb form
controlling
electricity
and production of the energy
. Later, and
Correct word choice
apply
electricity
flow
through an electrical Change the verb form
flows
panel
that serves as a controller for distributing the electricity
to appliances inside the house.
However
, it is interesting to note sometimes the energy
retrieved from sunlight can be exceed
the required amount which will be kept and sent to the Change the verb form
exceed
utility
meter. Likewise
, if the solar electricty
is being used over the produced amount, the Correct your spelling
electricity
utility
grid will account for providing the electricity
instead
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words panel, electricity, energy, utility with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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