The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart provides information
concernin
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concerning
the wildlife proportion
in
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of
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different
kind
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of animals from the year 2011 to 2016. Generally speaking, it can be seen from the line chart that bears
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the highest in 2026 with
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of almost 200.
Converesely
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Conversely
the rate of
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Dolphins
was the
least
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in 2016 with zero figure .
As well
as
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Whales were in the middle between the number from 50 to 100.
Along with
details, it is
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to say
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that the population
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of
bears in 2011
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dropped and ever since increased
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a long period of time .
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, the community rate of Dolphins
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in the year 2012
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150 after that it suddenly dropped to 0 in 2016.
Morover
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Moreover
, the society of Whales was changing and
unastable
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unstable
and in
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2013 we can see that the population
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both Bears and Whales are the same with
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a number
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100
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of 100
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.
Also
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it climbed up in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population variation
  • wildlife species
  • coastal areas
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • year-by-year analysis
  • significant changes
  • species-wise comparison
  • influence
  • climate change
  • human activities
  • conservation efforts
  • natural predation
  • inland areas
  • population trends
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