The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how older people in Europe
spend
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spent
thier
free time between 1980 and 2010.
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their
Overall
, we observe that, since 1980 the number of old age nationals who have spent on hiking has increased steadily. However
, in the case of reading and Change the spelling
theatre
theater
there were large fluctuations. Add a comma
theater,
Moreover
, after 2000, Surfing the internet has
gained popularity and Unnecessary verb
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hence
experienced a boom in the figures.
On closer examination, it can be seen that exactly 20% of elderly
public liked reading during free hours, Add an article
the elderly
this
has grown at a constant rate since then
, and by the end of 2010
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2010,
this
was
close to 80%. In addition
to this
, in 1980, 60% of the senior citizens were interested in Theater but during the next decade
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decade,
this
was
nearly 30%, after which there was
an increase. In 1980, out of every 100 old people 30 preferred to read books, but in 1990 and 2000 this
was
40 and 20 individuals respectively, and by the beginning of 2000 this
was
close to 60 individuals. Interestingly, after 2000, the senior citizens who were using internet
during their leisure time had shot up by almost 30% points.Add an article
the internet
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