The two tables below show the statistics of workers of foreign and us birth in the United States last year.
Both of the tables represent information about
laborers
who were born in foreign and US countries in the United States over the span of the year.
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labourers
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that males have a colossal proportion in workforce
and the eldest generation has the smallest impact on Add an article
the workforce
employment
sphere
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the employment
Firstly
, in foreign areas, an overwhelming proportion of working
class is males which is 14,385. Add an article
the working
Thus
the unemployment rate of men is 8.9 percent which is less than females’
rate. What is more, the unemployment rate is 15.9 Correct article usage
the females’
percent
for people aged from 16 to 24, which is the biggest percentage.
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per cent
Furthermore
, females have a lower ratio in workforce
than males in the US, which is 61,923 in numbers. Add an article
the workforce
In addition
, from 45 to 54 year
old people are the most likely to be employed which is 30,242 people and the most willing to be unemployed is the youngest generation which has 18.7 Fix the agreement mistake
years
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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