Nowdays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
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is argue
that Change the verb form
is argued
people
tend to Use synonyms
coose
to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or Correct your spelling
choose
organisation
. I completely Use synonyms
agree
Add the preposition
agree on
agree to
agree with
this
situation.
First of all, self-employed working mode as internet more and more popular. Linking Words
People
doing their Use synonyms
business
, Use synonyms
they
can promote their Correct pronoun usage
apply
business
on social media Use synonyms
platform
Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
with
Change preposition
at
low
cost. Correct article usage
a low
For instance
, nowadays, many Linking Words
poeple
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people
doing
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do
ig
shop" to sell their product Correct your spelling
big
such
as skin care Linking Words
product
or lessons about different Fix the agreement mistake
products
language
and skills. Fix the agreement mistake
languages
Then
, self-employed Linking Words
Use synonyms
business
are under all Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
of
things Change preposition
apply
controlling
. Self-employed Replace the word
control
Use synonyms
business
usually Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
is
one-man bands. They have not Correct subject-verb agreement
are
require
listening Change the verb form
required
anyone
Change preposition
to anyone
such
as Linking Words
boss
and Correct article usage
the boss
mangers
Correct your spelling
managers
order
. They can Fix the agreement mistake
orders
doing
any decision when they want and don't need anyone Verb problem
make
Add the particle
to allow
allow
. Correct pronoun usage
allow them
Besides
, Linking Words
self-employed
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the self-employed
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business
usually Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
have
not fixed working Add a missing verb
do have
time
. They can arrange the working time Fix the agreement mistake
times
according
the schedule. Self-employed working mode Add the preposition
according to
are
flexible working mode, low cost and free to Change the verb form
is
expenience
doing boss. Correct your spelling
experience
That is
the reason of Linking Words
people
choose to be self-employed.
Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
disadvantages
of being self-employed Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantage
that
they may not adopt working with others if they do Add a missing verb
is that
other's
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other
job
requiring Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
cooperate
with others in the future. Self-employed Replace the word
cooperation
Use synonyms
business
let them Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
to
control anything but it is totally different from an Change the verb form
apply
organisation
. An Use synonyms
organisation
Use synonyms
are
always discuss and Unnecessary verb
apply
figure
out the solution together. Correct subject-verb agreement
figures
This
point Linking Words
maybe let
self-employed Wrong verb form
may be
people
can not Use synonyms
adopted
.
Change the verb form
adopt
be adopted
To sum up
, Linking Words
self-employed
Correct article usage
a self-employed
business
Use synonyms
let
Wrong verb form
lets
people
feel experienced Use synonyms
to be
a boss, Change preposition
in being
flexible
working time and lower Add a missing verb
have flexible
business
or marketing Use synonyms
cost
. These are reasons Fix the agreement mistake
costs
people
choose to be self-employed. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
can not or Use synonyms
unadopted
to work with Add a missing verb
are unadopted
group
Add an article
the group
a group
on
an Change preposition
in
organisation
.Use synonyms
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