Many people think that students should be given homework every day. Others this that it will give them under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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system has improved a lot in the

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fifty years.

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some people believe that keeping children under constant pressure helps them in

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and eventually

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them in achieving

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their

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goals

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argue that

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may cause mental issues in children at an early age.

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essay will discuss both aspects of education with reasoned examples and provide a personal opinion in the conclusion.

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based on

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organisation,

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management

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that

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students

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can

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achieve

by focusing more towards their

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and completing their daily

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, Many teachers and parents

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best way to keep them in check.

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claims that it allows

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to focus more on their personal development rather than getting themselves

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negatively

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skills

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that

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may be able to learn because of daily

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Life

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skills

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playing

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as playing

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with friends and taking part in other curricular activities

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them to build teamwork, creative, and cognitive

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which can only be learned by interacting with people and things around which can never be achieved by just focusing on studies and

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, giving

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cause

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negative

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influence by causing mental

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conditions

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as anxiety, depression and panic

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, having mental health

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affects an individual abilities to

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assigned task

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. In conclusion, giving

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daily may support them and allow them to focus more on their

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approach may

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learning

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life

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which are

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necessary

for everyone to survive and make better and stronger

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with their communities. I believe a balanced approach is required, which will help

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the student

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to achieve their personal

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and sustain

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from getting mental health

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logical structure

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grammar spelling

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introduction conclusion

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complete response

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Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

323 words

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reiterate
enhance
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