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in
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some people believe that keeping children under constant pressure helps them in Fix the agreement mistake
years
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argue
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students
achive
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achieve
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homework
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believes
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believe
a
best way to keep them in check. Change the article
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survey
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surveys
students
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negatively
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goals
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argue
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skills
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students
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homework
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skills
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such
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as playing
allows
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allow
skills
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homework
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students
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cause
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have
negative
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a negative
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conditions
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attack
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attacks
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complete
.
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students
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homework
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life
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goals
but Use synonyms
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also
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learning
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skills
which are Use synonyms
neccessary
for everyone to survive and make better and stronger Correct your spelling
necessary
connection
with their communities. I believe a balanced approach is required, which will help Fix the agreement mistake
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