THE Maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

THE Maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the
center
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of a tiny town which is called Islip as it is now and the plans for its development.
Overall
, Islip town
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is a small area with minimum facilities. Plans are set to make the city
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more urbanized with bigger shopping places and new housing. Looking at the details, Islip town
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has only one main road with two
side
roads one of these
side
roads ends up accessing the park. In the future, the main road is projected to be pedestrianized and the
side
roads are going to be converted to a dual carriageway. Travelling around the city will be far easier by
this
conversion and people will shop confidently walking through the pedestrianized way. Shops in the north of the city will change to a big shopping
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. There will be a bus station on the left
side
and
also
a car park on the right
side
of the shopping
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. By developing the countryside, new housing is going to be constructed on the east
side
of the map. Shops in the
center
will remain the same but the housing at the bottom of the map is going to be more developed in the future.
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