THE Maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the
center
of a tiny town which is called Islip as it is now and the plans for its development. Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, Islip town center
is a small area with minimum facilities. Plans are set to make the city Change the spelling
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center
more urbanized with bigger shopping places and new housing.
Looking at the details, Islip town Change the spelling
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center
has only one main road with two Change the spelling
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side
roads one of these side
roads ends up accessing the park. In the future, the main road is projected to be pedestrianized and the side
roads are going to be converted to a dual carriageway. Travelling around the city will be far easier by this
conversion and people will shop confidently walking through the pedestrianized way. Shops in the north of the city will change to a big shopping center
. There will be a bus station on the left Change the spelling
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side
and also
a car park on the right side
of the shopping center
. By developing the countryside, new housing is going to be constructed on the east Change the spelling
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side
of the map. Shops in the center
will remain the same but the housing at the bottom of the map is going to be more developed in the future.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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