in spite of the advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, we are observing the development of agriculture and

also

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of new instruments which

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made it far easier to produce

food

.

Nonetheless

, many people around the globe are suffering from

lack

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of nutrients.

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, despite advances in

food

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the food

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industry

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industry,

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there are still some problems

to provide

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food

. In

this

essay,I will discuss some of the reasons

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this

situation and try to suggest some solutions. One of the major problems is

water

. Generally, most

countries

have minimum

water

sources to provide the amount of

water

which is needed

in

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industry. The solution for the government is to make people aware of their

water

usage and charge more taxes.

This

will considerably decrease the waste of

water

. Another issue is that there may be no other

food

source in some

countries

.

This

means that their industry is only based on agriculture and they couldn’t take

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of having other protein sources like animal farms.

This

problem

can be addressed by using experts to plan for

this

situation and introduce some new sources like poultry or cattle farms. The third

problem

is poverty. Some

countries

couldn’t develop their plans

due to

lack of money.

For instance

, they may have lots of experts to take action but they couldn’t because the projects need millions of dollars. The government can tackle the

problem

by taking loans from other

countries

and

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some investors. All things considered, some

countries

are facing

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hunger

due to

lack

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of money, not having alternative

food

source

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sources

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and poverty. Despite having future plans, the government should take urgent

actions

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as many people die from hunger every year. In my point of view, using experts will help

dealing

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with

this

life-threatening

problem

.