many people think that museums and galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. do you agree?

It is said that

works

from local

artists

should be only exposed in museums and galleries, rather than

works

from other countries. I strongly agree with

this

opinion

due to

preservation

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of cultural heritage. First of all, showing the local

artists

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work

at

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cultural settings can maintain the historical culture of nations.

By knowing

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that

general

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the general

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public usually

enjoy

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artworks which are indicating their

countries

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country's

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traditions and cultures, Local

artists

mainly create

the

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works

which are compatible with

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the public

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interest in order to persuade them to visit their

works

.

As a result

, historical traditions and customs may be brought in

artistic

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creatures.

This

leads that the national cultures can be kept.

Secondly

, advocating museums and galleries

to

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local

artists

can create more job opportunities. When the

artists

specially

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the young find placements in which they can present their

works

, they may be motivated to create fantastic artworks to

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be shown.

Consequently

, these valuable creatures can

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people to pay fees for visiting them.

This

leads to

make

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money and

also

introduce

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new young

artists

to

the

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society.

However

, some people think by showing

works

from other countries, the country can earn foreign currency and it would

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a great influence on the local economy. But I think foreign currency can be brought to the country

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alternative ways

such

as holding annual art festivals. In conclusion, I strongly believe that galleries and museums should only show the

works

from

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local

artists

instead

of foreign

them

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ones

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. Because

by

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local artworks, the cultural heritage can be preserved and

also

provided job opportunities for the young

artists

.