The line graph shows the changes in the populations of six different areas of the world between 1960 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the changes in the populations of six different areas of the world between 1960 and 2010.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the development of the number of people in sic different spaces between 1960 and 2010.
Overall
the
population
had been increasing from 1960 to 2010.
Furthermore
,
Sub-Saharan
Africa
, South
Asia
, East
Asia
and the Pacific have shown a dramatic rise.
In addition
, South
Asia
has the highest
population
compared to the other five areas. In 1960, the
population
of
Sub-Saharan
Africa
was lower than Europe and Central
Asia
around 250
million
. And
Asia
's
population
is over two times higher at around 750
million
.
Furthermore
, the
Sub-Saharan
Africa
region has
also
increased in
population
over the years since 1960. In 2010, the number of people in
Sub-Saharan
Africa
was higher than in Europe and Central
Asia
. At around 750
million
.
While
the number of Europe and Central
Asia
was established in these fifteen years.
Although
the chart shows a notable increase in inhabitants in East
Asia
and Pacific and South
Asia
, North America and Middle East and North
Africa
slightly rose. Inhabitants of East
Asia
and the Pacific had always the highest compared to other region areas. Since 1100 in 1960 rose to almost 2500
million
in 2010.
In other words
, the
population
had grouped over three times in 2010.
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