The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The floor layout of the central library has undergone a number of changes in two decades.
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, it can be seen from both diagrams of the central library, that everything has been replaced and used for other purposes. A new café had been built and removed tables and chairs in the middle of the library. The size of the CDs section has been increased and mainly all doors’ directions have been changed except the children’s
books
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room
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. It is conspicuous that the CD’s videos and computer
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have
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into a big size and put two sofas and have children’s fiction
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and storytelling events. The adult fiction
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section was replaced with all reference
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.
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, the reading
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( newspapers and magazines) was replaced with a modern computer
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. A new café has been set up in place of an enquiry desk (tickets, book returns, etc) and on the north side of the café three self-service machines have been installed, where students can get drinks and juices
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an information desk and adult fiction
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also
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in
this
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area. Probing ahead, the children’s
room
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has been converted into a lecture
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, where professors deliver lectures to their students.
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in the middle, tables and chairs used to be used for readers but they have been removed to make a more convenient space for students.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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