Some people think that hosting an international sport event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It’s believed that
an
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international
sport
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sports
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events
are
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hosted by a
country
is
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are
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good
however
others said that it is bad for the
country
. Both sides have pros and cons for the
country
. So when the
country
take
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a responsibility like that, the government will hold a balance.
While
hosting major
sport
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sports
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events
can bring prestige and
economy
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benefits. the benefits of
this
are
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an
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economy
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economic
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boost,
infrastructure’s
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infrastructure
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success and having a chance
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to
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show their culture
through
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worldwide.
For example
, tourists, athletics and media personnel spend money on accommodation, transport and food in
this
country
where
an
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intercontinental sports activities are hosted. Preparing for
this
event led to
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the construct
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construct
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construction
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new
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facilities like
stadium
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stadiums
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, transportation
system
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systems
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also
hotels.
Moreover
, have an opportunity to introduce their cultural prestige to the world.
additonally
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Additionally
they get
experience
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the next once.
However
,
take
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taking
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a
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permission to organize
such
events
brings some negative effects like
increase
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increased
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price
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prices
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, overspending money, traffic jams and pollution. After worldwide occasions
is
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are
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taken, the government of
this
country
have to create a good condition for all visitors.
Furthermore
, a great majority
traffic
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stuck can appear during
this
time.
As well as
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Also
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a lot of litter
come
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comes
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into being.
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, Uzbekistan faced like problems when it hosted the Asian Football Cup
last
year.
In addition
, spending
much
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money from their budget,
as a result
it
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leads to
borrows
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. In conclusion,
an international
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international sport actions
an international sport action
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sport
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sports
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actions considered
as
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apply
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useful to the
country
by people but there
is
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are
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contrast
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contrasting
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views among others. Even
a
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if a
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country
receive
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receives
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continental
sport
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sports
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events
,
they
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it
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should plan everything
with
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apply
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carefully as well
hold
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as hold
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a balance
the
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between the
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cost and long-term impact.
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