The map below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant.

The map below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant.
The maps illustrate the
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developments that
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took place in an area before the construction of a hydroelectric power plant and the facilities that can be seen now.
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, the most significant change is that the lake was constructed
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the north side of the river.
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, we can see that several facilities were built compared to the past. Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the national park, on the west side of the river, disappeared
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the forest still remained.
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, the historic castle was demolished and
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of that area, a new power plant and transmission towers were constructed today. .
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, with the removal of farmland, the hotel replaced the land,
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the north side of the mountain still existed. Another remarkable change is that the hydroelectric dam was built for the power plant,
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, the village and the bridge were still at the same location after the construction.

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