The map below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant.
The maps illustrate the
developmentsthat
took place in an area before the construction of a hydroelectric power plant and the facilities that can be seen now.
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developments that
development that
Overall
, the most significant change is that the lake was constructed at
the north side of the river. Change preposition
on
Also
, we can see that several facilities were built compared to the past.
Looking at the maps more closely, one can see that the national park, on the west side of the river, disappeared while
the forest still remained. Additionally
, the historic castle was demolished and instead
of that area, a new power plant and transmission towers were constructed today.
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Furthermore
, with the removal of farmland, the hotel replaced the land, whereas
the north side of the mountain still existed. Another remarkable change is that the hydroelectric dam was built for the power plant, however
, the village and the bridge were still at the same location after the construction.Submitted by hmhy0326 on
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