The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
The two illustrations beneath represent an island, before and after the building of some
traveler
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facilities.
Overall
, a comparison of the two plans shows a change from an empty island to a tourist
isle
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. Before constructing the islet, there was veritably nothing
besides
palm trees and a beach.
According to
the “after” picture, tourists constructed many edifices. The most noticeable discrepancy between these images is there are many houses placed. Getting back to the details, on the upside the
atol
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ATOL
is located as a restaurant.
Furthermore
, the downside of the eating place is right there is a reception.
In addition
, the right side and left side of the receipt, on both spots arranged some houses.
However
, on the left, there are fewer houses than on the right.
Additionally
, they have a palm tree around the places of residence compared to the
rightward
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of the recipience. A pier is positioned on the downward of the accommodations.
Besides
, the beach has become a swimming beach.
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  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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