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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people`s coffee and tea buying and drinling habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people`s coffee and tea buying and drinling habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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done in five different cities in
Australian
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 about buying and drinking coffee and
tea
. The results show that the number of
people
 in every city that went to a cafe
for drinking
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tea
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caffee
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coffee
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 four
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 was the most
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among
 the other habits. The
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 that the number of
people
 who went to a cafe
for drinking
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tea
 and
cafe
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cafes
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 in Australia were the most
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popular
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 in
coparison
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comparison
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two other
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. In Horbat, Melbourne and Sydney these
people
 were more than 60
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also
 these
people
 in Brisbane were
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exactly
 55
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 and in Adelaide were approximately around 50
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. The groups of
people
 who bought instant coffee in
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the last
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 4 weeks in Hobart were the most with around 55
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 and in
Brissbane
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Brisbane
 more than 50
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 which
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 almost the half of
people
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this
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also
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almost
 the same;
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,
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 amount in Melbourne is more than 45
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 and in Sydney is 45
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. The
amount
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 of
people
 who bought fresh coffee and
tea
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last
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 4 weeks in
Sydneywith
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Sydney with
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 less than 45
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 and more than 40
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 in
Mwlbourne
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Melbourne
. These
people
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 and in Brisbane and Adelaide were
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less than
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, people, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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