Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living In an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some individuals prefer to live in a
house
rather than an apartment
, while
others think that living in an apartment
has more pros. In my opinion, living in a house
has more advantages than living in an apartment
because people
can live whatever they want in houses
,they can make new relationships and also
houses
have more opportunities.
On one hand, people
who live in a house
can make every sound or every change in their home. If a person who lives in an apartment
cannot do these kinds of things because
neighbours might be annoyed and uncomfortable. Correct word choice
apply
Moreover
, if they want to change the garden of their apartment
or wall paint they have to be approved by every person who lives in that apartment
. However
, If they live in their own house
, they can do whatever they want to
home. Change preposition
at
For example
, they can draw symbols on their walls or they can plant their favourite flowers. Hence
, living in a house
has more personal advantages than apartment
.
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an apartment
the apartment
On the other hand
, living in a house
has more facilities than apartments. If somebody wants to make a fitness centre in their own house
they can do it in their garden or in their rooms without confirmation from their neighbours. Due to
the house
's free fields such
as extra rooms, garden and garage, they have an opportunity to make their hobbies and interests in their own houses
. For instance
, they can make a painting room or recording room in their garage. Therefore
, living in a house
has more facilities than an apartment
.
Lastly
, living in an apartment
has pros like nice relationships with neighbours. However
, people
can make these kinds of friendships in houses
. It does not depend on the place where you live, it just depends on the people
who is
your neighbour.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
To sum up
, some prefer living in an apartment
to a house
because they think that it is more advantageous. I disagree with this
opinion and I believe that living in a house
is more favourable for people
due to
opportunities
which Correct article usage
the opportunities
houses
have rather than apartments, good neighbourhoods and also
individuals can do whatever they want to their houses
while
they cannot make these changes in their apartments.Submitted by taylanpolat6124 on
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