The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the proportion of weekly
income
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and to average spending of families in the USA for the period of five years. The first trend that can be clearly seen is the ratio of money spent on food, which was significantly lower in 2018 than in 1968 even with a doubled increase in weekly
income
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. The next major change in correlation between
income
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and spending is for leisure: the more people earned the more they preferred to spend their money on leisure activities. Through these years, the percentage of
income
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spent on it had been rising, up to over twenty
percent
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per cent
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from nearly ten. Another visible difference happened in the housing clause, people began to spend more money on real estate, at the same time increasing their weekly
income
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, the numbers are almost identical, both numbers went up twice from 1968. The three least changed fields were fuel and power, clothing and footwear,
as well as
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personal goods. In the first category, people after starting to earn more began to spend less on buying clothes and numbers went down by fifty
percent
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per cent
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. Fuel and power had the lowest percentage during these years and
was
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always lower than fifteen
percent
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per cent
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. The
last
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one, personal goods, in
this
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category weekly
income
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, didn't affect much the average weekly spending and declined from almost fifteen to less than ten.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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