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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table diagram provides data about the amount of
milk
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 produced annually in the
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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,
Tanzania
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, and
Guatemala
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 from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, the
Netherlands
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 has the highest
milk
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production
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, surpassing other countries during the period.
However
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,
Guatemala
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 shows the lowest data for
milk
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 products, far lower than other countries. In 1990, the
Netherlands
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 produced the most
milk
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, with 11,262,000
kilograms
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;
Australia
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's
production
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 was slightly lower than the
Netherlands
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 by 6,000
kilograms
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. As for
Tanzania
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, it was in third place with 87,000
kilograms
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.
However
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,
Guatemala
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 was the nation with the lowest
milk
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production
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, at 26,000
kilograms
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. In 2000, both the
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 slightly decreased
milk
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production
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.
Nevertheless
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,
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 saw an increase
this
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 year. As time progressed, the
Netherlands
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 saw an increase from 2000 to 11,466,000
kilograms
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 in 2010,
while
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Australia
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 experienced a decrease to 9165,000
kilograms
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 during the same period. In terms of
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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, the increase tended to rise to 155,000 and 84,000, respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, australia, tanzania, guatemala, production, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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