The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The bar chart illustrates
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consumption
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the consumption
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of fast
food
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on
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the United
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citizien
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citizen
citizens
. Chart breaks down the
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six
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of six
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data. Units measured by
per centage
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percentage
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.
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, the United
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folk eaten
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ratio contributes mostly once a
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and once or twice a
month
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.
Every day
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consumption
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and never
consumption
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during the period was given similar each other and
contribute
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contributed
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fewest
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the fewest
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percentage
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. In 2003, consume of fast
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sligtly
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slightly
increased every day, several times a
week
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and once a
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respectively.
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, percentages are just under 5%, just over 15% and just over 30% respectively. After that,
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declined from 30%
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month
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, and it remained to decline a few times a year
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finally
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, individuals that never eat fast
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down
up
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by
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5% percent. In 2006, eating fast
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once a
week
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peaked
approximately
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at approximately
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35% and
then
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, decreased to
eat
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eating
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once or twice a
month
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25
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at 25
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%
percent
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per cent
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and people who never
eat
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ate
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fast
food
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percentage
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finished under
the
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apply
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5%. In 2013,
despite of
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after
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two years,
ratio
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the ratio
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of
consumption
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once or twice a
month
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peaked
approximately
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at approximately
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35%,
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and
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then
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there
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was
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a remarkable
decreased
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decrease
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on
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in
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people who eat fast
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a few times a year.
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percentage
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was 15% and individuals who eat fast
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never under the 5%
percentage
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final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, food, week, month, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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