The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates
consumption
of fast Correct article usage
the consumption
food
on
the United Change preposition
by
State
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States
citizien
. Chart breaks down the Correct your spelling
citizen
citizens
consumption
six
data. Units measured by Change preposition
of six
per centage
.
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percentage
Overall
, the United State
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States
folk eaten
ratio contributes mostly once a Add a hyphen
folk-eaten
week
and once or twice a month
. Every day
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Everyday
consumption
and never consumption
during the period was given similar each other and contribute
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contributed
fewest
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the fewest
percentage
.
In 2003, consume of fast food
sligtly
increased every day, several times a Correct your spelling
slightly
week
and once a week
respectively. In addition
, percentages are just under 5%, just over 15% and just over 30% respectively. After that, consumption
declined from 30% on
once or twice a Change preposition
to
month
, and it remained to decline a few times a year and
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apply
finally
, individuals that never eat fast food
down up
5% percent.
In 2006, eating fast Change preposition
by
food
once a week
peaked approximately
35% and Change preposition
at approximately
then
, decreased to eat
once or twice a Wrong verb form
eating
month
25
% Change preposition
at 25
percent
and people who never Change the spelling
per cent
eat
fast Wrong verb form
ate
food
percentage
finished under the
5%.
In 2013, Correct article usage
apply
despite of
two years, Change preposition
after
ratio
of Add an article
the ratio
a ratio
consumption
once or twice a month
peaked approximately
35%,Change preposition
at approximately
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and
then
there is
a remarkable Wrong verb form
was
decreased
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decrease
on
people who eat fast Change preposition
in
food
a few times a year. This
percentage
was 15% and individuals who eat fast food
never under the 5% percentage
final year.Submitted by bkardelenyilmazz on
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