WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

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number

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of persons from five

western

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Western

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countries

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staying in each other's states in 2011.

Overall

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Germany

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and

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the UK

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were overcrowded with foreigners followed by

Spain

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However

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Polish

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the Polish

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had the lowest increase in their population. British population is more present in

Spain

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Germany

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has more

people

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in the

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, Italy and

Spain

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were more present in

Germany

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all these

countries

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had their lowest

number

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in Polish.

Polish

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Poland

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had the highest

number

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of persons living in

other's

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other

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countries

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In contrast

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Spain

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had the lowest

number

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of their population staying out.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

Germany

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and the

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were more crowded with

people

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dealing with more immigrants.

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Polish

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the Polish

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did not

received

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receive

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many

people

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instead

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there

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was

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apply

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huge immigration to other

countries

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. It is noticeable that immigration is more present in

Germany

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and in

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the UK

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whereas

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Polish

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the Polish

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foght

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fought

fight

more with

emmigration

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immigration

emigration

while

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having the lowest

number

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people

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coming to

leave

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live

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there.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, countries, germany, uk, spain, people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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