The graph below shows the percentage of households with diferent kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information bselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words

The graph below shows the percentage of households with diferent kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information bselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of different electronic devices: washing machines, computers, phones, the
Internet
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, and DVD players used by American households between 1995 and 1999.
Overall
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,
although
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all devices witnessed an upward trend over the period, the washing machine trend stayed consistent with the highest figure compared to other kinds of technology. Computers and DVD players were overtaken by phones and the
Internet
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at the end
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of the given period, respectively. As can be seen, the percentage of washing machines increased from 60% in 1995 to just under 70% in 1996, and the latter rose to 80% in 1999. Computers and phones showed similar trends, jumping from 40% and roughly 20% at the beginning of the period to 60% and around 75% in 1990, respectively,
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, the phone figure overtook the computer in the same year.
On the other hand
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, the DVD player,
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a third-rank of popular household technologies, declined sharply to approximately 15% in 1996 and was replaced by
internet
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usage. And
then
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, it dramatically surged to 40% in 1999.
Whereas
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, the
internet
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,
initially
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the fifth-popular, moved upward to the fourth-popular device in 1999, at 40%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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