The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Water cycle

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underground erosion is more , meanwhile evaporation and transpiration are less .

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the base flow is not much affected .

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Water cycle

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A number of People are moving from rural areas to cities. Is it a positive or a negative development?

some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. what is your opinion about that?

Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space. Others argue they should spend the money for poor people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.