You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given map illustrates the changes that have been made
of
Change preposition
to
a
Correct article usage
the
bookstore
from 2000 to present
day.
The Correct article usage
the present
bookstore
in 2000 presented a number of book section
, right in front of the entrance could be found the travel and the new Fix the agreement mistake
sections
books
sections
and in left
corner you notice the fiction Add an article
the left
books
. While
,
in the right corner there is the service desk. Remove the comma
apply
Also
in the center of the bookstore
you would find the art, hobbies, and cookery book Add a comma
bookstore,
sections
.
It can be seen now that the bookstore
make
some improvements, one of them was to remove the Wrong verb form
made
sections
that could be found in the center
and replace them with tables, Change the spelling
centre
while
the art, hobbies, and cookery books
were placed next the
fiction section. Over the period the non-fiction area has turned into a cafe shop, Change preposition
to the
whereas
the service desk and
the travel Correct word choice
apply
books
and the new books
sections
remained in the same place as no changes where
made there.Correct your spelling
were
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bookstore, books, sections with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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