The diagrams show how the layout of a school library changed

The diagrams show how the layout of a school library changed
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The given maps illustrate the changes in the school
library
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from 5 years ago to the current plan. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is that the school
library
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changed to visible opportunities to compare the old plan of the building
To begin
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with, 5 years ago on the northeast
side
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of the
library
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was a Desk for computers, but now it already changed to Desks for student's laptops. On the southeast
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side
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side,
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there was a
Library
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office, and the current plan was altered to the Conference
room
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. The bookshelves on the north
side
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have not changed in the past and current times,
also
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in the centre of the
library
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there are only 6 Studying tables, but in the past
were
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only 4 tables. On the south
side
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, there were Bookshelves which were altered to Desks for students' laptops On the southwest
side
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of the school
library
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there are 4 rooms (recording studio, meeting
room
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, borrowing, and returning). In the past
instead
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of the recording studio was the classroom, the meeting
room
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was not changed, but the borrowing
room
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and returning desk were together, so nowadays it was already separated.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, side, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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