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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in town in Australia are currently attending. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main futures,and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in town in Australia are currently attending. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main futures,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
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 illustrates the distribution of
dance
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classes
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 in a town in Australia across four different categories: private
studios
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, school
halls
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, college-based
studios
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, and community
halls
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,
while
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 the bar
chart
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 indicates the various types of
dance
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classes
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, including ballet, tap, and modern, among different
age
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 groups of adolescents. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that the vast majority of
dance
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 lessons were located in private
studios
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 in
this
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 town in Australia.
On the other hand
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, ballet
classes
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 were the dominant type of
dance
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 sessions for teenagers under 11, compared to other types. In terms of the locations of
dance
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 training, private
studios
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 occupy half of the pie
chart
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 with a significant proportion of 48%. It is notable that school
halls
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 were suitable places for
dance
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 sessions in 24% of cases,
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 18% of
dance
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 instruction for adolescents occurred in community
halls
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.
However
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, only 10% of the
classes
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 were held in college-based
studios
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. Regarding the bar
chart
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, the number of students attending
dance
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 training varies from 0 to 700 individuals. Teenagers in Australia have different preferences based on their
age
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 group, particularly between those under 11 and those between 11 and 16 years. Ballet
classes
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 are particularly notable, with 600 participants under the
age
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 of 11. The remaining tap category of
dance
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classes
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 showed only slight distinctions among the different
age
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 groups.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, dance, classes, studios, halls, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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