The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighborhood since 1920.

The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighborhood since 1920.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighborhood since 1920.
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The maps demonstrate how the Sawry District
neighbourhood
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changed in a century from 1920 to 2020.
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, following the changes, the
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went from a greener and residential
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to a primarily industrial area. Some noteworthy additions were the construction of a petrol station and apartments, which enhanced the range of amenities available in the area. In 1920, the town was a mostly green area with trees occupying the south and some parts in the north. A row of houses and a shop could be found in the centre and west part of the
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, which was separated by Oak Avenue situated in the centre.
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, there was a beach and Elmwood River on the right top of the given
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,
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, on the opposite side of the
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, there was a Prestwich primary school next to Miller’s Lake.
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the only factory named Tulebug Bros.Cannery in that year was situated at the left top of the
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. By 2020, the
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had witnessed some major changes. The factory was knocked down and replaced with the Yang Office Complex. In the meantime, the Prestwich primary school was relocated to the south, and a new Lonoco petrol station was constructed in its location.
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,
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new apartments and a shop were constructed near the relocated houses and Oak Revenue, a new bike path and bridge were built on the north-western.

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