2.You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, oSay how you found out about the plans oExplain what problems your neighbourhood will face oSuggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Respected sir, I am writing

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with context to the proposal

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for

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construction

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the construction

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of an airport in

Model

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the Model

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Town

area

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of Ludhiana

city

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. Yesterday,

while

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I was watching a debate show on television aviation minister announced

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upcoming project, in order to boost

economic

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growth of the city.

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, there are certain issues that may prove a challenge to complete

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project. Most importantly,

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part of the city is too densely populated and there is a possible chance that government may need to relocate the residents by giving them adequate compensation for their property. Adding more to it,

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is a

low line

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area

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and water logging is a big issue, especially in

rainy

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season and it becomes tough for the commuters to even cross

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area

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. In the end, there are

few

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suggestion

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I would like to present to you.

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, it would be great if authorities

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this

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project to a new location.

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, rulers must communicate with local residents to ask, whether they want

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reform to take place or not in their

area

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, because, without

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proper planning the government's efforts can easily go veined. Hoping for

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positive feedback from your side. Yours faithfully, Jatinder

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mrsdnsSat Jul 27 2024

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grammar

Ensure to proofread your letter for minor grammar mistakes and typos, such as 'context to' should be 'context of' and 'water logging' should be 'waterlogging'.

task

Provide more detailed suggestions or alternative solutions for the problems discussed, which can strengthen your argument.

tone

Be clear and consistent with your tone. Sometimes, the formal tone wavers slightly. Ensure to maintain it throughout the letter.

task

The letter effectively addresses how you found out about the plans, explains the problems, and provides possible solutions.

cohesion

Logical structure and flow are quite good, making the letter easy to follow.

formal

The salutation and closing are appropriate and polite, adding to the formal tone of the letter.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

202 words

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