The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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ethanol
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or biofuel production
process
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.
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,
ethanol
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is
the
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biofuel made from only
plants
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.
Ethanol
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is produced for powering many types of vehicles. Interestingly, the carbon dioxide from transport will return to the atmosphere and will be used by
plants
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and
trees
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for photosynthesis.
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and
trees
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produce their own
energy
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from the
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called photosynthesis. Sunlight and carbon dioxide are involved in the
energy
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production
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. When they are grown enough,
plants
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,
trees
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, and other crops are harvested. They will pass
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the pre-processing
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process
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, and cellulose is produced.
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the cellulose will be broken down into smaller molecules.
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process
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with
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in order to make other types of sugar.
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, sugars are digested by microbes or enzymes to produce
energy
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, and at
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stage
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ethanol
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is made as the byproduct, which will be used for all sorts of vehicles.
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, the carbon dioxide from transport will be released into the atmosphere, and
trees
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will use it to generate
energy
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for growing and returning to
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ethanol
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production.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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