The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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Ethanol
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plants
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trees
for photosynthesis.
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process
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plants
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trees
, and other crops are harvested. They will pass Use synonyms
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the pre-processing
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energy
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ethanol
is made as the byproduct, which will be used for all sorts of vehicles. Use synonyms
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trees
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energy
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ethanol
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