The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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report derives from the maps which enumerate the shift of the industrial area between the present and future in the town of Norbiton. A glance at the illustration clearly reveals that all the trends encountered substantial changes in the function of the city, which becomes a residential place.
Furthermore
, compared to the current Norbiton which is full of factories around the central area, there are eclectic facilities including a school, shops and a medical
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in the planned future development. To be specific, there is a bridge between the residential spot which is supposed to be a Farmland now and the central area across the river.
Moreover
, housing buildings replace the factories in the region.
Also
, there is a school on the very eastern side of the town and a playground is located close to the school. In stark contrast to the current map, there is a circular rotation road at the southern end of the town which is connected to the other township.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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