The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The demonstrated data illustrates the two pie charts of energy manufacture. In the same country, 1995 and 2005 years significant saw the difference between the production of coal, gas, petro, nuclear and other powers.
Overall
, one of the biggest resources such
as coal and gas remains in the most demand. Therefore
,
with time, the creation of them remains mainly the same, from around 29% in 1995 to 30% in 2005.
The production of petro has dropped slightly in the second year to 19.55%, whereas
previously was 29.27%. However
, the demand for nuclear power has risen from 6.40% to 10.10%. Additionally
, as technologically
campaigns demonstrated development they Change the word
technological
also
started to produce other alternative forces, which in 1995 were only 4.90% and in 2005 has
grown to 9.10%.Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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