You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The
giving
table illustrates the consumption of the proportion of monthly Replace the word
given
household
income
in five European(France, Germany, UK, Turkey and Spain
) countries, the displayed sources of food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment
.
The graph reveals the following important facts. Firstly
, the overall
most
proportion of monthly Correct word choice
highest
household
income
is housing from the UK at 37%. Also
, Germany and France have the highest household
income
in
33% and 31%. Change preposition
at
On the other hand
, Turkey and Spain
are smaller than other countries in housing but both are high in Food and drink at 36% and 31%.
In UK
, it has Correct article usage
the UK
Correct article usage
a similarly
similarly
Change the word
similar
household
income
in clothing and entertainment
at 11% and clothing in Germany and entertainment
in spain
, both are Change the capitalization
Spain
similarly
at 15%. Change the word
similar
Therefore
, the small group is clothing in France and spain
at 7% and 8%. Change the capitalization
Spain
Then
, Turkey is small in Entertainment
at 10% only.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, income, spain, entertainment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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