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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 schedule illustrates the proportion of household payments in five European
countries
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:
France
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, Germany, United Kingdom, Turkey, and
Spain
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. These data are separated into four categories: Food, Property rental, Clothing, and Entertainment, and measured in percent of total
income
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. The report reveals that the population in three
countries
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 of the developed
countries
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 in Europe:
France
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, Germany, and the United Kingdom spend their
income
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 more than 30 percent on housing rental, especially with the United Kingdom rental at 40%. Germany and
France
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 have housing payments at 33% and 31%, respectively.
In contrast
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, the property payment in
Spain
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 has 18% of total household
income
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 which is the lowest in
this
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 group.
Therefore
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,
this
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 significant information shows that people can find the cheapest house rental in
Spain
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.
However
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, Spanish and Turkish spend most of their money on food and beverage, approximately 31% and 36% of their salary.
As a result
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, the food payment in these
countries
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 is more expensive than in three developed
countries
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.
In addition
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, all five
countries
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 in Europe spend less than 20% of total household
income
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 on clothes and entertainment, especially with clothes in
France
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 and
Spain
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 being lower than 10% of total earnings.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, france, spain, income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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