The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967, and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates information about the
students
enrolling to
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at
Manchester
University in 1937, and 2017.
Overall
, both the proportion of female
and the Fix the agreement mistake
females
number
of new students
who enrolled increased from 1937 to 2017. Whereas
the proportion of male
dropped from 1937 to 2017. The Fix the agreement mistake
males
percentage
coming from oversea
in general is less than that of the Correct your spelling
overseas
percentage
coming within 40 miles of Manchester
except from the year 2017.
Firstly
, Manchester
University experienced a growth in the number
of student enrolment
from 327 in 1937 to 1183 in 1967. From 1967 to 2017, it rose dramatically from 1133 to 6254. Fix the agreement mistake
enrolments
This
means that the number
of new students
enrolling increased by a total number
of 5927 from 1937 to 2017.
Secondly
, the percentage
of female
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females
is
35% in 1967. It Wrong verb form
was
then
reached a peak of 55% in 2017. In comparison, the percentage
of male
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males
inn
1967 is 65%. Correct your spelling
in
Nevertheless
, it suffered a slight fall to 45% in 2017.
Thirdly
, the proportion of students
who came from near Manchester
is
1-2% in 2017 which is a small Wrong verb form
was
per cent
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percentage
comparing
to that of 32% from Wrong verb form
compared
oversea
.Correct your spelling
overseas
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