The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
The graph below illustrates the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries Between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that in 1990 was the highest of
figure Change preposition
apply
while
in 2000 was the lowest. Oman and S. Arabia were
the Verb problem
had
biggest
of number fertility Correct your spelling
highest
rate
.
On the one hand, Looking Fix the agreement mistake
rates
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at Bart
Bart
chart Change noun form
Bart's
at
detail, Oman was Change preposition
in
the
bigger at 7 Correct article usage
apply
1990
than Change preposition
in 1990
2000
at approximately 5,3. And Change preposition
in 2000
then
it followed
by S. Arabia Add a missing verb
was followed
were
bigger at amount Correct subject-verb agreement
was
6,8
in 1990 than Change preposition
of 6,8
2000
at about 52. Change preposition
in 2000
Moreover
, Qatar was more higher at 4,2 in 1990 than in 2000 at about 3,3. And addition, UAE in 1990 was the
bigger at 4 than in 2000 at just under 3.
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, Regarding the lowest data, Kuwait was the bigger at amount 3,2
in 1990 than Change preposition
of 3,2
2000
at Change preposition
in 2000
amount
Correct article usage
the amount
2,5
. Change preposition
of 2,5
Furthermore
, Bahrain was the
higher at 3.2 in 1990 Correct article usage
apply
then
Correct your spelling
than
2000
at about 2,2.Change preposition
in 2000
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