The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two-line graphs display people using
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household
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appliance
for washing clothes, preparing food, and cleaning and the other graph shows Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
time
spent using them to carry out the required Use synonyms
household
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activities
in a country from 1920 to 2019.
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Overall
, owning appliances in 1920 seems to be very low , especially refrigerators, but over a period of Linking Words
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owning them gradually grew and seems to Use synonyms
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reached its top mainly with refrigerators from 1980 to 2019 which was way low compared to Verb problem
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a washing
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washing machines
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, and Use synonyms
vacuum
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cleaners
in 1920. Use synonyms
Along with
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time
spent on housework gradually decreased from 1920 to 2019.
In 1920 purchasing electric appliances was below 50% especially owning fridges was below 10%. Use synonyms
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machines
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vacuum
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cleaners
are as close to around 30 and 40%. The Use synonyms
time
spent on Use synonyms
household
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activities
was in and around 50%. But these steadily decrease over the Use synonyms
time
period from 1920 to 1960. Use synonyms
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the fact that owning appliances surged from 1940.
Between 1940 and 2000 owning fridges were sky rocketed above 50% in 1940 and reached almost 90% in 1960. Linking Words
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washing Linking Words
machines
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vacuum
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cleaners
were steadily increasing between the approximate range of 50 to 80%. Use synonyms
As a result
, a sudden drop in Linking Words
time
spent on Use synonyms
household
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activities
was seen. Use synonyms
Then
in the following years washing Linking Words
machines
saw a slight drop and increase reaching around 75% in 2019. Use synonyms
In contrast
, a steady increase was seen in Linking Words
vacuum
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cleaners
till 1980 and Use synonyms
then
both refrigerators and Linking Words
cleaners
reached 100% by 2000 and continued to be the same till 2019. Use synonyms
Also
, the effect of Linking Words
time
taken to carry out Use synonyms
household
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activities
was decreasing consistently reaching 20% in 1969 and Use synonyms
then
a marginal decrease between 20 to 10% over the Linking Words
time
period of 1980 to 2019.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words household, time, activities, machines, vacuum, cleaners with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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