You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
#minutes #show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The two-line graphs display people using
a
Correct article usage
apply
household
appliance
for washing clothes, preparing food, and cleaning and the other graph shows Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
time
spent using them to carry out the required household
activities
in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, owning appliances in 1920 seems to be very low , especially refrigerators, but over a period of time
owning them gradually grew and seems to be
reached its top mainly with refrigerators from 1980 to 2019 which was way low compared to Verb problem
have
a washing
Correct the article-noun agreement
washing machines
a washing machine
machines
, and vacuum
cleaners
in 1920. Along with
this
time
spent on housework gradually decreased from 1920 to 2019.
In 1920 purchasing electric appliances was below 50% especially owning fridges was below 10%. Whereas
washing machines
and vacuum
cleaners
are as close to around 30 and 40%. The time
spent on household
activities
was in and around 50%. But these steadily decrease over the time
period from 1920 to 1960. This
was due to
the fact that owning appliances surged from 1940.
Between 1940 and 2000 owning fridges were sky rocketed above 50% in 1940 and reached almost 90% in 1960. Whereas
washing machines
and vacuum
cleaners
were steadily increasing between the approximate range of 50 to 80%. As a result
, a sudden drop in time
spent on household
activities
was seen. Then
in the following years washing machines
saw a slight drop and increase reaching around 75% in 2019. In contrast
, a steady increase was seen in vacuum
cleaners
till 1980 and then
both refrigerators and cleaners
reached 100% by 2000 and continued to be the same till 2019. Also
, the effect of time
taken to carry out household
activities
was decreasing consistently reaching 20% in 1969 and then
a marginal decrease between 20 to 10% over the time
period of 1980 to 2019.Submitted by nlchiranth11 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words household, time, activities, machines, vacuum, cleaners with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
▼