The diagram below shows the foor plan of a public hibrary 20 years ago and how it looks now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
report derives from the above maps which enumerate a public bookstore 20 years ago and now.
As an initial overview, the entrance is on the same side as the library
. Not only is this
point clear, but also
fiction books used to have a wide space 20 years ago; nevertheless
, now it has some shelves besides
the info desk.
Notably, the tables and chairs which were located in the centre of the Replace the word
beside
library
have been removed, providing a spacious space in the
front of the entrance gate. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, a cafe has been opened instead
of the enquiry desk. Next,
right above the cafe, you will find the information desk, adult fantasy books, and three machines for self-service.
Moreover
, the children's room
has been relocated to the left top of the library
, and now it provides sofas and a storytelling corner. Besides
, there is no longer a reading room
; however
, the library
provides a room
for lectures and sessions opposite the adult's imagination bookshelves. Finally
, the bookstore provides a computer room
for research and it is situated in the same room
that newspapers and magazines used to be in.Submitted by mariameissa23 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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