The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates all phases of

development

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the development

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of ladybugs and their anatomy.

Overall

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, there are 4 stages of growing, starting from the egg stage and ending with the

adult

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insect.

Furtheremore

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Furthermore

according to

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the graph after each metamorphose, the body of

lady

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the

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bird

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ladybird

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has some significant dissimilarities with other stages of development.

To begin

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with, in the

begining

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beginning

, there are a plethora of eggs on the leaf, that

stays

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stay

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there for 2-5 days.

Then

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, in the second phase, larvae which came from the egg

is surviving

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survive

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for 3

week

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weeks

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to settle on the leaf and become a pupa for a week.

Finaly

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Finally

, there is an

adult

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exemplar of a

lady bird

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ladybird

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Moreover

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, the graph shows, that the

adult

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insect is considerably different from its previous appearance.

Firstly

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, it has

red

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a red

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elytra, that crowds its wings and abdomen.

Moreover

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, compared to the other phases, on the head of an

adult

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ladybug, there are two antennas.

However

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, there is

also

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simmilarity

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similarity

with larvae as they both have six legs.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words adult with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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