The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart provides information about the changes in
divorce
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rates within a five-year period (2011-2015) for two European nations.
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,
Sweden
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saw a decreasing tendency,
while
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Finland
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followed the opposite tendency within the given time frame. Both countries’
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rates had fluctuations.
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Finland
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initially
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had a lower
rate
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, it outraced
Sweden
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at the end
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of the period. As far as
Sweden
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is concerned, its
divorce
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rate
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was about 45% in 2011, being higher than
Finland
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’s
rate
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by approximately 8%.
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, it rose to almost fifty
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in 2012.
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, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013 and continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015. When it comes to
Finland
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, the percentage of divorces was 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012 when about one-third of marriages in
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ended with a
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(as opposed to almost half in
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).
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, the figure experienced
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steady growth during the next two years. It went up to approximately 39% in 2013,
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increased by around 3% in 2014, and remained steady for the next year, outracing the
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of
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, sweden, finland, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • divorce rates
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • notable
  • significant
  • substantial
  • higher
  • lower
  • comparison
  • consistent
  • vary
  • percent
  • overall
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