The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart provides information about the changes in
divorce
rates within a five-year period (2011-2015) for two European nations.
Overall
, Sweden
saw a decreasing tendency, while
Finland
followed the opposite tendency within the given time frame. Both countries’ divorce
rates had fluctuations. Although
Finland
initially
had a lower rate
, it outraced Sweden
at the end
of the period.
As far as Sweden
is concerned, its divorce
rate
was about 45% in 2011, being higher than Finland
’s rate
by approximately 8%. Then
, it rose to almost fifty percent
in 2012. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013 and continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015.
When it comes to Finland
, the percentage of divorces was 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012 when about one-third of marriages in Finland
ended with a divorce
(as opposed to almost half in Sweden
). However
, the figure experienced a
steady growth during the next two years. It went up to approximately 39% in 2013, Remove the article
apply
then
increased by around 3% in 2014, and remained steady for the next year, outracing the rate
of Sweden
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