The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.

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The diagram illustrates how renewable

energy

trap

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traps

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heat

from the

sun

and how using petrol materials

released

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releases

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carbon

dioxide

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into

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the air through burning fuels.

Overall

, the

sun

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sun's

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heat

has three

reflactes

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reflected

reflects

replicates

on the

earth

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earth's

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surface,

heat

trapped by greenhouse gases,

and

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apply

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heat

radiated into space , and

energy

reflacted

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reflected

off

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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While

all transportation produced

carbon

dioxide

in the air.

Firstly

, using

greenhouses

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greenhouse

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gases

butter

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rather

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than

fossile

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fossil

because it takes their

heat

from the

sun

which is

sustainable

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a sustainable

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source.

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, the

sun

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sun's

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heat

energy

radiated

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radiates

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into space and

increase

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increases

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air temperature,

also

its

heat

reflacted

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reflected

off

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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. Another point to

considered

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carbon

dioxide

which is produced from vehicles it has a huge effect on trees.

Moreover

felling

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the felling

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of trees that absorb

carbon

dioxide

due to

burning

fossile

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fossil

fuels by transportation. For that, greenhouse gases can use the

sun

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sun's

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heat

without and damage to the environment,

moreover

, it is sustainable

energy

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, heat, sun, carbon, dioxide with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

natural process
greenhouse effect
Earth's surface
sun's energy
atmosphere
reflected
absorbed
re-radiated
greenhouse gases
carbon dioxide
methane
nitrous oxide
water vapour
ultraviolet radiation
infrared radiation
fossil fuel burning
deforestation
concentration
global warming
melting ice caps
glaciers
rising sea levels
extreme weather patterns
mitigating

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The most important education for students should be conducted in classroom，not out of the classroom.

Many people realize that people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of lives than people born in earlier centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?