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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data? summarize the information, and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data? summarize the information, and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts depict
an information
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information
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 about
nutritional
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the nutritional
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 consistency
from
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of
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 two different
kind
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kinds
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 of foods. The first one is
medium
 baked
potato
 and the second one is
macaroni
.
Overall
, the
nutrion
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nutrition
 of
medium
 baked
potato
nearly
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is nearly
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 balance. Meanwhile, carbohydrates in
macaroni
 become the most
dominated
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dominant
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nutrition
.
To begin
 with,
medium
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the medium
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 baked
potato
 had
proportion
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a proportion
the proportion
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 of
nutrition
 like
this
. Carbohydrates with
total
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a total
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 amount
35
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of 35
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 per
cent
.
Then
, the second largest
nutrition
 is protein about 25 per
cent
. Other nutrients and
glocose
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glucose
 have
same
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the same
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 percentage around 15 per
cent
.
Furthermore
, saturated fat contributes 10 per
cent
 to
nutrition
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the nutrition
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 of
medium baked
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medium-baked
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potato
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potatoes
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. Move to
Macaroni
, carbohydrates
is
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are
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 really
dominated
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dominant
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 here with
number
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the number
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 52 per
cent
.
Subsequently
, slightly different with
medium
 baked
potato
, saturated fat
become
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becomes
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 the second rank
nutrition
 with 21 per
cent
.
Glocose
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Glucose
 and protein have
same
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the same
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 presentation at 11 per
cent
.
Last
, other
nutrients
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nutrient
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 content
5
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of 5
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per
cent
calculated
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is calculated
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 from
overall
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the overall
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nutrition
 of
macaroni
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, macaroni, nutrition, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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