The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart below gives information about global
population
percentages and the distribution of wealth
by region.
The country
with the highest wealth
shared compared to its population
is North America with wealth
towering at 35% and the population
only at a measly 5%. The difference
in this
country
accumulates to roughly 30% which is bigger than in other countries. However
, the country
that has the least difference
is Africa, despite lower wealth
share
, it still managed to have the smallest difference
since its population
share
reached only 10% making a difference
of 9%
In contrast
, the countries with the lowest wealth
share
are Africa and India, with only a measly 1%. However
, the country
that has the highest population
share
is China at approximately 23%. Compared to its wealth
at only 3%.
Overall
, the country
with the most wealth
share
is North America whereas
the countries that has
the least Change the verb form
have
wealth
share
is
Africa and India.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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