Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While

it is widely debated that division of classroom based on

student

's academic performance should be implemented in school as it provides an appropriate focus for each group, others argue that it is better to educate mixed-

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students

together

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to promote discrimination-free among the

students

. Both

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of view and reasons why I support

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the latter statement will be elaborated on in

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essay.

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with, it may

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sensible for some to believe that

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students

from

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their ability can be helpful for lecturers to educate

accordingly

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to

level

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of

understaning

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understanding

of

students

.

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is possibly because certain groups

required

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different teaching

technique

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to approach

such

as a novice should begin with

basic

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level

whereas

those

advance

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can do something more complex problem.

For example

; mathematics, it would be a waste of time to spend the same period of time teaching the same lecture for the high performance

students

that they could done it within a few days,

while

those who performed

lesser

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are likely to take more time to understand a lesson. Many

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of

this

idea might

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that a mixed classroom will aid a

harmony

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environment. As they have various

level

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of

students

to meet. The need to help each other can prevent the

discrimation

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discrimination

over highly intelligent

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and those who are not.

However

, I personally argue in favour of a varied academic ability class seeing that it

offer

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various benefits, especially societal preparation for

students

. Though it is understandable that every

students

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have

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their own

strenght

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strength

strengths

and

weakness

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besides

their academic

performances

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,

this

can help

student

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students

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to understand

about

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life and others as we

all

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not perfect. To exemplify,

while

a nerdy, smart

student

solving

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mathematics easily, the others might talented in sports

instead

. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that

same

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level

class

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can benefit

for

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developing

student

performance, I am of the opinion that mixed

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one

provide

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positive

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outcome

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as it can help the

student

to become harmonized and

understanding

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life.