The chart below shows the result of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. The respondents were asked if they thought the situation improve or get worse.
The given chart illustrates European youngsters' anticipations for 20 years later in five various
field
of life including communication, health, Change to a plural noun
fields
Quality
of food, water and air
.
Overall
, most of the young ones are optimistic about relationships, and they believe that the condition in this
matter will be improved in 20 years. Furthermore
, they expect that the air
quality
become worse in this
period.
It is obvious that the only field that the
most of the young (54%) from Europe believe Correct article usage
apply
that
might get better in the future is the communication between populace. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, the greatest disappointment is seen about
the Change preposition
in
air
. The
70% of them hold the idea that the Correct article usage
apply
air
quality
will get worse. With regards quality
of food, the amounts of them that think it will become worse or get better are almost even.
Regarding quality
of water and health, the Add an article
the quality
percents
of the young anticipating that the condition will be worse than now are 60 and 58 respectively.Replace the word
percentages
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quality, air with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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