The chart below shows the result of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. The respondents were asked if they thought the situation improve or get worse.

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The given chart illustrates European youngsters' anticipations for 20 years later in five various

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of life including communication, health,

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of food, water and

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, most of the young ones are optimistic about relationships, and they believe that the condition in

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matter will be improved in 20 years.

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, they expect that the

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quality

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become worse in

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period. It is obvious that the only field that

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most of the young (54%) from Europe believe

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might get better in the future is the communication between populace.

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, the greatest disappointment is seen

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70% of them hold the idea that the

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will get worse. With regards

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of food, the amounts of them that think it will become worse or get better are almost even. Regarding

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of water and health, the

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of the young anticipating that the condition will be worse than now are 60 and 58 respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

161 words

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The chart below shows the result of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. The respondents were asked if they thought the situation improve or get worse.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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