The chart below shows the result of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. The respondents were asked if they thought the situation improve or get worse.

The chart below shows the result of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. The respondents were asked if they thought the situation improve or get worse.
The given chart illustrates European youngsters' anticipations for 20 years later in five various
field
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of life including communication, health,
Quality
of food, water and
air
.
Overall
, most of the young ones are optimistic about relationships, and they believe that the condition in
this
matter will be improved in 20 years.
Furthermore
, they expect that the
air
quality
become worse in
this
period. It is obvious that the only field that
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most of the young (54%) from Europe believe
that
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might get better in the future is the communication between populace.
Moreover
, the greatest disappointment is seen
about
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the
air
.
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70% of them hold the idea that the
air
quality
will get worse. With regards
quality
of food, the amounts of them that think it will become worse or get better are almost even. Regarding
quality
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the quality
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of water and health, the
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of the young anticipating that the condition will be worse than now are 60 and 58 respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words quality, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • respondents
  • expectations
  • prospects
  • foresee
  • entrepreneurship
  • environmental conditions
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • green initiatives
  • technological advancements
  • innovations
  • digital transformation
  • daily life
  • quality of education
  • access to higher education
  • learning opportunities
  • social stability
  • quality of life
  • equality
  • healthcare
  • living standards
  • community well-being
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