The graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady.

The graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Panama City during the period 2010-2019. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady.
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The presented line chart compares data about the rate of crimes which were committed in Panama City between 2010 and 2019.
Overall
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, it was important that the number of burglaries decreased, but
then
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the trend of other ones roughly stabilised.
According to
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the plot, burglary, which was the main offence, at the beginning had 3400;
then
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it increased to 3700 in 2011;
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,
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motivation fell significantly to 1000 in 2015;
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it climbed to nearly 1400 and the direction was approximately constant. Car theft, The second one, in 2010, had 2800, it hit the maximum in 2011 at 2900;
nevertheless
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, it touched the lowest point in 2013 by 2000 owing to the fact that it reduced moderately;
thereafter
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, it went up slightly to the number which was the same as in 2010 in the
last
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year. The graph demonstrates that the crime which had the minimum figure was robbery , which was rapidly changing, inasmuch as at the start it had 700 after that, it peaked in 2012 at 900;
moreover
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, it reached its lowest point in 2015 at 500. Later in 2019, the number was the same as in 2010.
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