The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A plan of a floor of a public library in the past 20 years and its current look.
Overview, the entrance never changed. The
two
centre tables and eight chairs were removed in
the current library. All rooms were rectangular except for the enquiry Change preposition
from
desk
which had a semi smooth quarter centre
shape.
20 years ago, the Central Library was as follows: Add a hyphen
semi-smooth quarter-centre
On
the centre, there were Change preposition
In
two
round tables with 8 chairs around each table. Located on
the upper left Change preposition
in
corner
, was a room
with cds
, videos and Correct your spelling
CDs
computer
games. On
the upper Change preposition
In
right
corner
, a children's book room
was situated there. Then
on the lower left corner
, there was a reading room
with newspapers and magazine
Fix the agreement mistake
magazines
while
on the opposite lower right
corner
, there was an Enquiry desk
with tickets, returned books
and other things. Between the cds
, videos Correct your spelling
CDs
and
Correct word choice
apply
computer
games and the reading room
, adult fiction books
could be located there and also
just after the two
tables, between the children's books
and enquiry desks, non-fiction books
for adults.
Currently, where they were cds
and video and Correct your spelling
CDs
computer
games, children's fictions
Change the noun form
fiction
books
are found there. It is now a storytelling events room
with two
sofas, diagonally facing each other. The lecture room
is is
now Remove the redundancy
apply
on
the far Change preposition
in
right
corner
. On
the Change preposition
In
right
lower corner
there now is a cafe. In the middle, there are three self service
machines and an information Add a hyphen
self-service
desk
. Adult fiction books
are found just outside the information desk
. The computer
room
is on the lower left side and outside of it, are all reference books
. There is plain
passage leading to the entrance.Add an article
a plain
the plain
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