The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A plan of a floor of a public library in the past 20 years and its current look.
Overview, the entrance never changed. The
two
centre tables and eight chairs were removed Use synonyms
in
the current library. All rooms were rectangular except for the enquiry Change preposition
from
desk
which had a Use synonyms
semi smooth quarter centre
shape.
20 years ago, the Central Library was as follows: Add a hyphen
semi-smooth quarter-centre
On
the centre, there were Change preposition
In
two
round tables with 8 chairs around each table. Located Use synonyms
on
the upper left Change preposition
in
corner
, was a Use synonyms
room
with Use synonyms
cds
, videos and Correct your spelling
CDs
computer
games. Use synonyms
On
the upper Change preposition
In
right
Use synonyms
corner
, a children's book Use synonyms
room
was situated there. Use synonyms
Then
on the lower left Linking Words
corner
, there was a reading Use synonyms
room
with newspapers and Use synonyms
magazine
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magazines
while
on the opposite lower Linking Words
right
Use synonyms
corner
, there was an Enquiry Use synonyms
desk
with tickets, returned Use synonyms
books
and other things. Between the Use synonyms
cds
, videos Correct your spelling
CDs
and
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apply
computer
games and the reading Use synonyms
room
, adult fiction Use synonyms
books
could be located there and Use synonyms
also
just after the Linking Words
two
tables, between the children's Use synonyms
books
and enquiry desks, non-fiction Use synonyms
books
for adults.
Currently, where they were Use synonyms
cds
and video and Correct your spelling
CDs
computer
games, children's Use synonyms
fictions
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fiction
books
are found there. It is now a storytelling events Use synonyms
room
with Use synonyms
two
sofas, diagonally facing each other. The lecture Use synonyms
room
is Use synonyms
is
now Remove the redundancy
apply
on
the far Change preposition
in
right
Use synonyms
corner
. Use synonyms
On
the Change preposition
In
right
lower Use synonyms
corner
there now is a cafe. In the middle, there are three Use synonyms
self service
machines and an information Add a hyphen
self-service
desk
. Adult fiction Use synonyms
books
are found just outside the information Use synonyms
desk
. The Use synonyms
computer
Use synonyms
room
is on the lower left side and outside of it, are all reference Use synonyms
books
. There is Use synonyms
plain
passage leading to the entrance.Add an article
a plain
the plain
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, desk, corner, room, computer, right, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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