The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A plan of a floor of a public library in the past 20 years and its current look. Overview, the entrance never changed. The
two
centre tables and eight chairs were removed
in
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the current library. All rooms were rectangular except for the enquiry
desk
which had a
semi smooth quarter centre
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shape. 20 years ago, the Central Library was as follows: 
On
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the centre, there were
two
round tables with 8 chairs around each table. Located
on
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the upper left
corner
, was a
room
with
cds
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CDs
, videos and
computer
games. 
On
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the upper
right
corner
, a children's book
room
was situated there. 
Then
on the lower left
corner
, there was a reading
room
with newspapers and
magazine
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while
on the opposite lower
right
corner
, there was an Enquiry
desk
with tickets, returned
books
and other things.  Between the
cds
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CDs
, videos
and
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computer
games and the reading
room
, adult fiction
books
could be located there and
also
just after the
two
tables, between the children's
books
and enquiry desks, non-fiction
books
for adults. Currently, where they were
cds
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CDs
and video and
computer
games, children's
fictions
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books
are found there.  It is now a storytelling events
room
with
two
sofas, diagonally facing each other. The lecture
room
is
is
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now
on
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the far
right
corner
.
On
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the
right
lower
corner
there now is a cafe. In the middle, there are three
self service
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machines and an information
desk
.  Adult fiction
books
are found just outside the information
desk
. The
computer
room
is on the lower left side and outside of it, are all reference
books
. There is
plain
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passage leading to the entrance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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