The diagrams below show a structure used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided diagrams illustrate information concerning how tides produce household electric

system

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through the given invention and how it takes advantage

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the

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natural movements.

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, it can clearly be seen that the artificial system is located near the cliff or sea wall and there are technology and natural mechanisms related to

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process. Starting

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the gadget components and their functions,

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comprises

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3 primary parts.

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, it is

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tide barrier formed by stainless steel with

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chamber in the middle. Based on

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following shape, it can

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absorb

tide power and push air current into the turbine.

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, the rotating turbine can activate the electric engine by its connected wiring systems.

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, the column with

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mouth is made to create reverse

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which is

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explained in the second diagram. With regard to the second diagram, once the wave has

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out, the

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down, so that the turbine is

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activate

activated

again.

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this

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movement, which is

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same direction as before,

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electricity is produced.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

172 words

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